"Lynn,"said my little sister, Alisha Taylor. She is a 5 year old girl, spoiled. She called me for things such as 'tug me to bed' or 'let's play with dolls' or 'tell me a story'.
She had been calling me over 20 times today when I was doing my science project.
" Tell me a story ,Lynn."
"Tell me the story about the little mermaid."
Oh no. I think I have told that story for a million times in a week.
" Why the little mermaid? There are other stories," I said in a complaining way.
" Because the little mermaid is the best story I've ever heard!" exclaimed Alisha as if she was excited.
I thought for a while. Can't I change the story? It will be just a little. I'm sure that Alisha herself is bored.
"Okay. Just please please do not freak out."
.......Once upon a time, in the sea kingdom, there were 7 daughters of the sea king. They were mermaids. The seventh Mermaid, Rina's birthday was coming. She was so excited to explore the land. the night before her birthday, she went to Kelt the witch. She wanted to have legs.
" Kelt. Please give me your magic potion. I want to have legs.I'll give you anything,"
said Rina.
" If you have legs, you will have to give me your voice. If you want your voice back, you should first tell me so I can prepare.It costs a lot, you know.Second, you should marry with a man you first saw. Or you will turn into a bubble and go to either the heaven or the hell," said Kelt.
"I doesn't matter. Just give me the potion before I kick you in the head."
This mermaid, Rina was a very strong girl. She was actually controlling the patrols of the sea kingdom. Kelt was a little bit scared, so she finished things very quickly.
* * *
Rina finally got to approach the land.
'The start of an exciting world!' she thought to herself.
There, was a human coming.He had brown hair and brown eyes. He looked at Rina as if he was surprised.
"Who are you?" asked the man.
Rina wrote on the ground. 'Who are you??'
The man introduced himself as the prince of the country. Since the Prince was very curious about her, he took her to the castle. Rina had to attend the banquet.
During the banquet, a Princess came.The princess asked a lot of questions. Rina couldn't answer them. She grabbed the princess' and wrote down things.
'Be quiet, you spoiled girl.everyone is looking at us as if we are crazy. Don't you feel? I really want to make you a crazy person like those drunken people. But since we met the first time, I'm trying to push that feeling down'
The princess is really scared. She ran away.
The next day, the princess said that she is going to marry with the prince.
' Okay, so she is trying to use the power of the kingdom, huh? I think it is okay to kill her. Right?'
That night, Rina sent a message to Kelt. The message was about 'please give me my voice back'. The 6 sisters of Rina heard about it and went to Kelt's house.They traded their hair for a sword.
That night, the sisters came to to Rina.
" If you kill the prince with this sword, you will get your voice back and also your life 'full of adventures". This is what the sisters said to Rina.......
" Wait. Rina should die if she don't marry!!" exclaimed Alisha.
"Oh, please.The sisters traded it with their hair!!It is okay. Now stop interrupting me and let me go on with the story.
...........Rina was confused about should she kill the prince or not. She finally went to the prince's room..
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She had been calling me over 20 times today when I was doing my science project.
" Tell me a story ,Lynn."
"Tell me the story about the little mermaid."
Oh no. I think I have told that story for a million times in a week.
" Why the little mermaid? There are other stories," I said in a complaining way.
" Because the little mermaid is the best story I've ever heard!" exclaimed Alisha as if she was excited.
I thought for a while. Can't I change the story? It will be just a little. I'm sure that Alisha herself is bored.
"Okay. Just please please do not freak out."
.......Once upon a time, in the sea kingdom, there were 7 daughters of the sea king. They were mermaids. The seventh Mermaid, Rina's birthday was coming. She was so excited to explore the land. the night before her birthday, she went to Kelt the witch. She wanted to have legs.
" Kelt. Please give me your magic potion. I want to have legs.I'll give you anything,"
said Rina.
" If you have legs, you will have to give me your voice. If you want your voice back, you should first tell me so I can prepare.It costs a lot, you know.Second, you should marry with a man you first saw. Or you will turn into a bubble and go to either the heaven or the hell," said Kelt.
"I doesn't matter. Just give me the potion before I kick you in the head."
This mermaid, Rina was a very strong girl. She was actually controlling the patrols of the sea kingdom. Kelt was a little bit scared, so she finished things very quickly.
* * *
Rina finally got to approach the land.
'The start of an exciting world!' she thought to herself.
There, was a human coming.He had brown hair and brown eyes. He looked at Rina as if he was surprised.
"Who are you?" asked the man.
Rina wrote on the ground. 'Who are you??'
The man introduced himself as the prince of the country. Since the Prince was very curious about her, he took her to the castle. Rina had to attend the banquet.
During the banquet, a Princess came.The princess asked a lot of questions. Rina couldn't answer them. She grabbed the princess' and wrote down things.
'Be quiet, you spoiled girl.everyone is looking at us as if we are crazy. Don't you feel? I really want to make you a crazy person like those drunken people. But since we met the first time, I'm trying to push that feeling down'
The princess is really scared. She ran away.
The next day, the princess said that she is going to marry with the prince.
' Okay, so she is trying to use the power of the kingdom, huh? I think it is okay to kill her. Right?'
That night, Rina sent a message to Kelt. The message was about 'please give me my voice back'. The 6 sisters of Rina heard about it and went to Kelt's house.They traded their hair for a sword.
That night, the sisters came to to Rina.
" If you kill the prince with this sword, you will get your voice back and also your life 'full of adventures". This is what the sisters said to Rina.......
" Wait. Rina should die if she don't marry!!" exclaimed Alisha.
"Oh, please.The sisters traded it with their hair!!It is okay. Now stop interrupting me and let me go on with the story.
...........Rina was confused about should she kill the prince or not. She finally went to the prince's room..
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Good story mentioning two different scenes - the story in the book and Lynn reading to Alisha.
ReplyDeleteYou chose different endings. You may want to use some more illustration and give your story a title. Keep up the good work :)